Comparing the reusal of former preamble to PPSwedens proposal
Who is it for? It seems to me to be somewhat based on discussions among EU insiders and not so much as a text aimed at the general public? Some texts seem to be part of an internal discussion (the first paragraph , and the “all” in “An important goal of all Pirates is…”, why all? Some difficult EU lingo appears: “citizen -friendly processes” which means? “democratic deficit”)
A number of the paragraphs, nr 1, 3, first half of 4, and 5 seem to be about the lacking democracy of the EU. This drives it home but leaves little to other perspectives. In a way there are a lot of extra words here and there. Such as: “Together we must encourage the development of a common European space for “……
I think it is better to start with a presentation of us than with the somewhat intricate presentation/discussion on EU at the start.
The old preamble:
Today’s European Union (EU) as a supranational institution is a project of its member states rather than of its citizens. (Suppose that that means that the Council has more power than the Parliament?, could be said then but not in the beginning, and hasn’t the Commission even more power? Or is it a historical analyses?, correct but unclear. Democratic critique 1) Pirates believe that Europe should be organised in the common interest of all European citizens, as well as the interests of member states. (is this a compromise, doesn’t say much)
Pirates in the European Union have adopted this election programme and strive together to make our vision for the Union a reality. (No real contents here. Should be last or first if included.)
The democratic deficit within the European Union has existed since its formation and has not been sufficiently addressed in the course of the integration process. (democratic critique 2,= history, which was talked against in Strasbourg)
An important goal of all Pirates is to build a solid democratic foundation for the Union. In order to achieve that goal it is crucial to ensure that political processes are more citizen-friendly. (democratic critique 3 , included in PPSE-text, there trying to define citizen-friendly) Together we must encourage the development of a common European space for culture, politics and society to protect the existing rich and diverse cultures that exist within the Union. (Lacking in PPSE – unnecessary long here, could be included there as “Protect the diverse national and regional cultures within the Union”)
The EU must live up to its own principles on subsidiarity. Decisions should not be taken at EU level if they can be better resolved at national, regional or local level. (included in PPSE) Equal and easy access to communication and an informed citizenry are basic requirements in legitimate democratic decision making. (idea included in PPSE) Political decisions at the European level need to be preceded by Europe-wide debate and allow for the adequate participation of all. (included in PPSE)
Pirates strongly believe that all people must have the right to fair and equal treatment. It is essential that society respects the rights of minorities. We will stand against discrimination of any kind and oppose movements that act against Human Rights. (included in PPSE)
The Internet as a medium of communication offers tremendous opportunities for political development, overcoming top-down, one-way communication. (more on the development of internet in PPSE) Pirates will therefore defend the freedom of the Internet with fierce determination at European level as well as on a global scale. (included in PPSE)
Things in PPSE not present here
Internet is bringing on a new culture of creativity knowledge and sharing. (not only political development)
Supporting wise digitalisation, adapt AI to society
against mass surveillance,
against big tech power
from value list, values not present in old preamble: , integrity, dignity, the rule of law, justice, promoting responsible self-empowerment